I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong.
Hi Abdurrahim,I enjoyed your work, but next time I thinkyou should work on adding more detail toyour description. If more detail is addedit will help people understand more of whatyou have done.
It would also help if you could add a Learning Intention.
This week I read a text called comets.We had to do a D.L.O on it.We had to make animations for the words we didn't know.
Hi Abdurrahim,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your work, but next time I think
you should work on adding more detail to
your description. If more detail is added
it will help people understand more of what
you have done.
It would also help if you could add a Learning Intention.
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